Page contentsPage contents Acronyms In most cases, write out the long form the first time it is used on the page, followed by the acronym in brackets. After that, use the acronym. In some cases it can be acceptable to use the short form only, if it is more common than the long form (hint: if you have to stop to think what the long form actually stands for, it’s probably okay to use the short form.) very widely known to – and entered into search engines by – the general public (NATO, for example) When in doubt, write it out. Active and passive voice In most cases, use the active voice so that the reader knows who is taking the action. Instead of … … you could write Complaints can be submitted to the Commission in writing. You can submit a complaint to the Commission in writing. or You can complain to the Commission in writing. On the other hand, the passive voice can be useful to avoid mentioning the actor, for example if this information is politically sensitive or irrelevant. Addresses General In most cases, write out postal addresses as follows: Name of building Street name and number Town (with post code, if known) Country Example Tabačka Kulturfabrik Gorkého 2 Košice Slovakia Bilingual addresses For addresses in Brussels, Belgium, provide the street name in French and Dutch, separated by a forward slash. Example Berlaymont Building Rue de la Loi/Wetstraat 200 1049 Brussels Belgium Exceptions On the European Commission website, postal addresses of Commission departments must never include a street name and use the generic postal address of the Commission instead. Example Infrastructure and Logistics in Brussels European Commission 1049 Brussels Belgium If applicable, you may include the street name in postal addresses of Commission executive agencies. Example Research Executive Agency Place Rogier 16 1049 Brussels Belgium British English Follow British English spelling conventions, but avoid colloquial terms and expressions that will be familiar only to native English speakers. Contractions Use contractions: don’t, can’t, they’ve, we’ll – unless you want to emphasise the contracted word (not, have, will). Conversational tone Writing on the web is more conversational than the administrative style used in typical Commission writing - it makes your content more accessible and easier to understand. Use language that your audience uses, rather than what your colleagues in the European Commission probably use. If your audience is.... use terms like.... instead of.... people looking for jobs in other EU countries jobs abroad, live and work in another EU country free movement/circulation of labour companies wanting to do business with the Commission tenders or contracts public procurement Duplication Make sure that the user need(s) your writing is meant to meet is not already covered somewhere else on the European Commission's web presence. Search for the subject on the site or ask a policy expert. If relevant content exists elsewhere, link to it, don't duplicate. FAQs – frequently asked questions FAQs are poor web writing practice because they make information harder to find, by bringing together unrelated points - content is easier to understand in context they're hard to scan quickly, because the term(s) users are looking for usually appears at the end of the question FAQs are generally not questions that users actually ask, but information that the organisation imagines that people want to know about its work they often duplicate other content on the site If you take the time to understand your users’ needs, and plan and write your content accordingly, it will answer their questions that are genuinely frequently asked. Gender-neutral Use gender-inclusive language that does not refer to the gender of the person where this is not relevant. Don't say... do say... Policeman Police officer Air steward/ess Flight attendant Do not use the male pronoun to refer to a generic individual, but also avoid he or she and (s)he. You can do this by addressing the user directly as you using plural nouns using they, them, their to refer to an individual. This is perfectly acceptable in standard English today. Don't say... do say... If a customer wishes to complain, he must first contact the national authorities in the country where he made the purchase If customers wish to complain, they must first contact the national authorities in the country where they made the purchase. If you wish to complain, you must first contact the national authorities in the country where you made the purchase. If a customer wishes to complain, they must first contact the national authorities in the country where they made the purchase These rules also apply to your business partner, even if he is based outside the EU These rules also apply to your business partner, even if they are based outside the EU Images: alt text and captions Always use the alternative text description field. This is important because the alt text will be displayed if the image fails to load the alt text is read aloud to users of text-to-speech software Captions usually appear below the image in the page. If using image captions, make them meaningful. Captions draw the reader’s eye, so use them to highlight a point from the main text, or add more information. Simply stating what the picture shows is a wasted opportunity. Jargon-free See jargon and clear writing alternatives for more information. Names and titles Write the person's full name (including their role or position, if relevant) and title the first time you refer to them on the page Eddy Izzard European Commission President Miriam Dupont King Rollo of Belgium Sir Pavel McCartley Chairperson of the committee on fruit and veg Jeremia Cobbitt In subsequent uses, use Mr or Ms (or other title) followed by the surname (or, for some titles, the first name) Mr Izzard Ms Dupont King Rollo Sir Pavel Ms Cobbit Don’t repeat the person's role as a title in the same piece of content (President X, Vice-President Y, Commissioner Z) unless it is not otherwise clear from the context and the role is significant. Consider using a short version of the title depending on context and target audience. For example, write Pierre Dubois, the Commissioner for Taxation if the text only talks about the taxation part of his remit. Negatives Negatives can make a sentence difficult to understand. Instead of … … write not less than a year at least a year / a year or more. does not comply with violates / infringes Plain language Plain language is easier to understand. It will not make you seem less educated or elegant. It will make you more credible.It's not just a question of style.web users are busy and need to understand quicklyto be found, web pages need to use the words your target readers are likely to enter into search engines (the way most web users find web pages)professional image – text on the web has a high profileup to 20% of people have problems reading generally (older people, visually impaired, those with learning disabilities, the “functionally illiterate”) and will otherwise find pages inaccessible“Clear and simple language” is a requirement of the World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) standards. The European Commission has committed itself to these internationally-recognised standards in accessibility of public websites and content - COM(2001) 529. To this end, the Commission runs its own Clear writing programme (EU Login required) and offers a writer's toolbox (EU Login required), which provides practical tips on writing clearly both in print and for the web. Quotes Avoid them except on news pages, in press releases and in blog posts. They rarely contain actionable information. People come to websites to do something. If you use quotes, then if a person is quoted, include their full name if a person is quoted whose contact information is available on the European Commission website (http://commission.europa.eu), point users to their contact page if available, provide a clearly labelled hyperlink to the quoted content Short and to-the-point Why keep it short? information overload – readers are in a hurry, looking for something specific (not reading for pleasure) ever-more people are viewing web pages on mobile devices, with much smaller screens than desktop computers easier and quicker translation Streamline your writing to help them find information by asking yourself if each section and each word is truly necessary leaving out introductory phrases such as It is often the case that…, The first thing to keep in mind is that…, Please be aware that…, Remember that… keeping sentences simple. Complicated sentences force users to slow down and work harder to understand what they’re reading. If your sentence is longer than 25 words, break it down into smaller units of meaning. Research shows that more than 90% of readers understand what they are reading if the average sentence length is 14 words. At 43 words, comprehension drops to less than 10% (Source: Gov.UK). Short titles for legislation Please refer to GoPro's guidelines on how to write short titles for legal acts. How to be as concise as possible the substance – write only about what the reader really needs to know - and nothing morethe words – in every sentence, use only the words you need to convey the key messageAvoid the easy, running style used for print documents – instead aim for spare and functional prose that makes every word count. Tips on how to cut words Official namesNo need to always spell out the full official titles of people, bodies, laws, agreements and other documents, etc.Use only the key words/concepts readers need to understand. Make the name into a link, and this will take people to the full official title if they need it.Don'tDoTitles UNESCO Convention on the Promotion and Protection of Cultural ExpressionUNESCO convention on cultural expressionWe know that UNESCO isn’t trying to stamp out cultural expressionMinister for Financial AffairsFinance ministerMinistry for Social Security, Generations and Consumer ProtectionSocial security ministry(in texts mainly about social security - just use the relevant part of the title)Laws, official documents, programmes, etc. Regulation (EC) No 689/2007 of the European Parliament and of the Council of 21 March 2007 establishing and amending the rules on data protectionEU regulation 689/2007 on data protection(Note – if there are several instances of the same regulation, be sure to differentiate between them)White paper on environmental protectionenvironment white paperIn 2002 the Council and the European Parliament adopted a Regulation establishing the European solidarity fund.In 2002 the EU decided to set up a European solidarity fundEvents The Copenhagen summit on 12 June 2005 that addressed the issue of Climate ChangeThe 2005 Copenhagen summit on climate change WordinessDon't DoEU initiatives aimed at protecting human health from the risks which may be caused by dangerous chemical substancesEU initiatives to protect people from dangerous chemicals[50% shorter than the original text]Where the Commission's services make representations to the authorities of the Member State against which the complaint has been made, they will abide by the choice you have made regarding disclosure of your identity. Where you have not indicated your choice, the Commission's services will presume that you have opted for confidential treatmentIf we have to contact the authorities you complained about, we will keep your identity confidential unless you state otherwise[64% shorter than the original text] Empty phrasesDon'tDoIt is often the case that a complaint is sent…Complaints are often sent…The first thing to keep in mind is that you must update your pages regularly …You must update your pages regularly …quantities - in the majority/number of cases, a large proportion of, low level/amount/volume/extent of, a total ofmany, some, few or mosttime phrases - at (the) present (time) / at an early date / in the near future /now RepetitionDon'tDoThe participants have recognised that […] dialogue between these cultures […] is an essential factor in bringing their peoples closer, promoting understanding between them and improving their perception of each other.Dialogue and respect between cultures and religions are a necessary pre-condition for bringing the people closer. The mass media can play an important role in the reciprocal recognition and understanding of cultures as a source of mutual enrichment.It's enough to simply say, “Dialogue between cultures brings people closer”.The original passage says essentially the same thing about 7 times!Irrelevant informationDon'tDoWhen the “European Economic Area Treaty” (EEA Treaty) came into force on 1st January 1994, and Austria joined the European Union (EU) on 1st January 1995, secondary EC law also took effect in the area of social security (included in this are, in particular, Regulations 1408/71 and 574/72 relative to social security provision for migrant workers).Social security in Austria is now also covered by EU law (in particular regulations 1408/71 and 574/72 on social security provision for migrant workers).“Now” is what interests readers - not intricate historical details. Upper or lower case See upper or lower case. Verbs, not nouns Many nouns ending in -ion are simply verbs in disguise. Ask yourself if there is a verb that could replace your noun phrase.Instead of …… writecarry out an evaluation ofevaluategive consideration toconsidersince the accession of Poland to the EUsince Poland joined the EU Writing good titles GuidelinesIt is important to keep the title tag under 60-65 characters. This recommendation is based on user experience and SEO.ExamplesHere are a few examples (based on true stories) that could help you to understand how improvements can be made.Title / URLImprovementsEUROPEAN COMMISSION | POLICIES, INFORMATION AND SERVICEShttp://ec.europa.eu/info/index_enPOLICIES, INFORMATION AND SERVICES | EUROPEAN COMMISSIONABOUT THE EUROPEAN UNION | EUROPEAN COMMISSIONhttp://ec.europa.eu/info/about-european-union_enTechnically fine, but it fails to show that you are in the Information part of the website, for example:About the European Union - Policies, Information and Services | European CommissionThat's too long (83 chars). Given that the context is clear, consider deleting the references to European:ABOUT THE UNION - INFORMATION SERVICES | EUROPEAN COMMISSIONSTRATEGY | EUROPEAN COMMISSIONhttp://ec.europa.eu/info/strategyIt is not clear from the title which strategy is being talked aboutSTRATEGY AND ACTION PLAN OF THE EUROPEAN UNION | EUROPEAN COMMISSIONBETTER REGULATION: WHY AND HOW | EUROPEAN COMMISSIONhttp://ec.europa.eu/info/law/law-making-process/better-regulation-why-and-how_en"why", "and" and "how" are stopwords, their use should be avoided in titlesBETTER REGULATION IN THE EUROPEAN UNION | EUROPEAN COMMISSIONFIND A PARTNER | EUROPEAN COMMISSIONhttp://ec.europa.eu/info/how-eu-funding-works/find-partner_enSearch results for "Find a Partner in Europe" show dating sites as ads but EU/EC-related pages as indexed pages. Unfortunately we haven't made it to the first page yet, but wait for Valentine's Day.FIND A PROJECT OR FINANCIAL PARTNER | EUROPEAN COMMISSIONDIRECTORATE-GENERAL FOR AGRICULTURE AND RURAL DEVELOPMENT | EUROPEAN COMMISSIONhttp://ec.europa.eu/info/publications/directorate-general-agriculture-…With this as the h1 heading, the page should be a page about DG AGRI itself. It's not. It's a page of Planning and Management documents related to DG AGRI. These are not the same thing.The h1 heading should summarise precisely what the page contains.Better titles would be:Management Plans and Activity reports for DG AGRIManagement Plans and Activity reports for Directorate-General for Agriculture and Rural DevelopmentDG AGRI DocumentsDirectorate-General for Agriculture and Rural Development Documents Writing good meta descriptions Guidelines Simulating a search result You can use SEOmofo to see how your page will appear in search engines. Just insert the title and meta description to check if the length is ok. Describe actions Identify the kind of actions that the visitor might want to achieve by visiting your page and find the closest verb that expresses that action (e.g. "learn", "consult", "discover") Provide a solution or benefit that the page offers Tell the searchers what they can expect by visiting the page. Make it clear that there is a real benefit to clicking through and reading your page and that they will be served with clear, informative and valuable content. Keep the description under 155 characters Search engines don't usually trim by characters but by pixel length. This means that a description made of iiiii will be allowed more characters than one made of ooooo. Use SEOmofo to test the appearance of the meta description. Don't deceive searchers If your meta description deceives the reader with content not relevant to what they expect, they will hit the back button as soon as they reach the page. This will increase the bounce rate and give Google a signal that your page is not relevant for the search terms. Make it specific and relevant Humans are good at recognising a predictable, generic meta description when they see it in the SERPs. That's why it is important to connect with your target audience and let them know they'll find specific information they couldn't get anywhere else. Contact and support Need further assistance on this topic? Please contact the team in charge of Europa Domain Management (EU Login required)